This treatment of the idea of complexity is clearly incorrect for the simplest possible reason… we have no idea what the Kolmogorov complexity is of these objects versus each other, since the lower bounds are exactly identical! (Said bounds are just, a hair above zero because we can be relatively sure that their existence is not absolutely required by the laws of the universe, but little more than that.) The upper bounds are different, but not in an illuminating manner.
Thus, we have to use other things to determine complexity, and the brain is clearly far more complex in the relevant ways than something like Microsoft Word™. Word processors of similar use can fit into a tiny fraction of the size of Microsoft Word without losing much in terms of features and usefulness, and may not be any simpler. So with the entire premise incorrect, it makes the rest of the post uninteresting. (Yes, I only skimmed the rest to see you didn’t address the issue.)
To illustrate the issue, people like me believe that software is mostly bloat (which is only complex in the other sense). The same program can take 1 MB or 10,000MB simply by changing compression scheme (especially if we are assuming the latter was done very badly, by people who have no idea what they are doing). More concretely take the example of a music video which might be 300 MB for 180 seconds after compression, but before compression might be 100GB (3 bytes per pixel for 3840 * 2160 pixels for 24 frames per second for 180 seconds / 1024^3 = 100.1129150390625 GB and the result could easily be higher since it could realistically be 4 times the pixels at 2.5 times the fps at 4⁄3 the bytes per pixel which would push it over a terabyte). Note that the compressed music video isn’t necessarily any simpler by Kolmogorov than the uncompressed version despite the latter being about 333 times the size, since we don’t actually know the simplest representation of the music video (and generic compression algorithms often find the lossily compressed version harder to compress and end up being much larger than the original).
Both examples are harder to understand than necessary. Either “The firefighters who’d been sleeping jumped into action when the alarm sounded.” or “When the alarm sounded, the firefighters who’d been sleeping jumped into action.” seem much more understandable. The actual short version that flows would be “Then sleeping firefighters jumped into action when the alarm sounded.”
Long version: The problem I see with the examples of Hypotaxis and Parataxis might be that it is artificially chunking up the ideas involved into separate bits when it is unnecessary, and so the idea the sentence is trying to get across requires stitching it back together, distracting from the meaning.
Short version: The Hypotaxis and Parataxis examples are hard to understand because you have to stitch the ideas back together.
Which of those two explanations is easier to understand?
Bonus medium length explanation: The Hypotaxis and Parataxis examples are hard to understand because they artificially break up ideas which have to be put back together to make sense out of the sentence.
I think the medium length explanation is what happens when you try to make the long version make more sense without losing any meaning. The short explanation makes the most sense, but it does lose a little meaning. I think the long versions exist mostly because it is harder to due medium length, and the short ones exist people got tired of the long ones but still don’t want to go through all the effort of fixing them.
I know I could have written a much more concise and understandable version of this comment without losing any meaning, but I usually pick one of the two easy ways.