Well “redund” isn’t a word without the “O” and I think it would scan better with just “redounds with opportunities” or “explodes with opportunities.” The second part isn’t really a problem in the quoted text though.
Damn it, my brain’s playing tricks on me. I know the word “redound”, I’m pretty sure I used it even, and “redund” did feel weird, but when I looked for it in a dictionary, twice, I still didn’t notice the missing “o”...
It’s probably “redound”, it sounded weird to me to at first, but it is an English word, albeit probably not very often used at present:
http://www.leoyan.com/century-dictionary.com/cent2jpgframes.php?volno=06&page=5022 (top of right column)
Well “redund” isn’t a word without the “O” and I think it would scan better with just “redounds with opportunities” or “explodes with opportunities.” The second part isn’t really a problem in the quoted text though.
I would also change the first “opportunities” to “possibilities”.
Damn it, my brain’s playing tricks on me. I know the word “redound”, I’m pretty sure I used it even, and “redund” did feel weird, but when I looked for it in a dictionary, twice, I still didn’t notice the missing “o”...