Well “redund” isn’t a word without the “O” and I think it would scan better with just “redounds with opportunities” or “explodes with opportunities.” The second part isn’t really a problem in the quoted text though.
Damn it, my brain’s playing tricks on me. I know the word “redound”, I’m pretty sure I used it even, and “redund” did feel weird, but when I looked for it in a dictionary, twice, I still didn’t notice the missing “o”...
Well “redund” isn’t a word without the “O” and I think it would scan better with just “redounds with opportunities” or “explodes with opportunities.” The second part isn’t really a problem in the quoted text though.
I would also change the first “opportunities” to “possibilities”.
Damn it, my brain’s playing tricks on me. I know the word “redound”, I’m pretty sure I used it even, and “redund” did feel weird, but when I looked for it in a dictionary, twice, I still didn’t notice the missing “o”...