Harry would have to maintain the transfiguration for the rest of Hermione’s life, or until they find a replacement solution. Given the extent of the injuries that may not be within his strength.
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A prominent pop-culture example is the Mass Effect sci-fi game series. Unless Commander Shepard’s gender is directly relevant (such as during romantic subplots), he/she will say the exact same lines whether man or woman.
Over five years and three lengthy and ambitious games, I’ve probably read hundreds of pages of people discussing every aspect of the series and its narrative. The single time I can remember anyone saying that ‘FemShep’ felt a bit off was in direct response to the above observation; outside of that, she was wildly popular and often named as a positive model for the writing of female protagonists.
I mean, if I come out of this planet alive I’m probably not going to be fazed by much after that
My opinion of you has ebbed and flowed a lot, Eliezer, but one thing for which I doubt I will ever stop loving you is the way you can talk like a science fiction character with the most perfect nonchalance.
Hey, since Plasmon brought up chapter 62: can we assume that whenever the fic resumes, there’s going to be a scene of Harry’s parents visiting Hogwarts?
(I post this less in order to get an answer than to prevent the off-chance you forget about it and end up having to squeeze in a hasty explanation for the missing visit.)
Hmm, he didn’t say “she’s not going to appear until later”, he said “that’s not going to be apparent until later”. This suggests that the character has already appeared, doesn’t it?
(I might have guessed that the androgynous Voldemort could have been a female character in this fic, but I believe Eliezer has already flat-out stated that he’s sticking to Quirrell = Voldemort.)
Fawkes is male in HPMOR.
e: unless the “that’s not going to be apparent until later” means that he will be revealed to have actually been female all along later on.
I would say a small edit is probably in order, because “as obvious to him as a Thestral” definitely doesn’t come across as an ability that requires any concentration.
But I think Karl’s explanation is a much better one and should be canonical.
The great thing about reality is that eventually you hit it.
Source: Andrew Sullivan in an otherwise fairly bland political post
I’d first look for a multi-millionaire to whom to make the offer.
If you can choose, French shutters work miles better than roller shutters at blocking light.
Isn’t this what curtains and shutters are for?
In Ch. 7, the Harry-and-Draco conversation needs to be toned down even further because multiple parents have announced their intention to have their children read this fanfic – and I know that revision is going to be controversial, but Draco’s current conversation is also a little out-of-character by the standards of the Draco in later chapters.
This is an explicit statement that the concern about kids reading MoR is what is prompting the revision, with minor considerations about Draco’s character being secondary.
Strongly agree with this.
I have no problem with making Draco’s character more consistent, and if Eliezer honestly feels that that should mean removing or altering his casual dehumanisation of peasants, so be it.
But I urge Eliezer to seriously ask himself, with all his strength as a rationalist, about this and any other changes: “Would this be sacrificing the quality of the narrative for the sake of making a very, very mature story superficially more marketable to children?”
And yes, I feel those apparently charged words are wholly appropriate: removing a rape reference is just a terribly superficial way of making the story ‘kid-friendly’, because it isn’t kid-friendly in much, much deeper ways. If a kid isn’t ready to know what ‘rape’ means, would you want him to read Chapter 82? Or the Bellatrix chapters? If anything the rape reference in Ch. 7 works as an excellent gatekeeper, filtering the audience before the really disturbing stuff begins to kick in.
Those are very valid objections, but since the phrase “great works of literature like Hamlet or Fate/Stay Night” constantly causes hilarious overreactions whenever I link Three Worlds Collide around, I’m entirely supportive of Eliezer taking liberties for this purpose.
Upon further reflection, I think the question of “how much of the pain/suffering/unpleasantness/etc. from a given even happens on the spot, and how much lingers on in the memory?” has an answer that wildly varies, even for the same individual.
The worst physical pain I ever felt involved a certain surgical operation, but it causes me no discomfort whatsoever to remember it; conversely, I once got stung by an unknown insect while still half-asleep, and the thought still makes me twitch and clutch at my neck. On a more mental level, there are a few seemingly random subjects that make me flinch and feel burning shame whenever brought up, because almost a decade ago I happened to make a fool of myself in conversations that involved them; yet those were by no means the most sorrowful moments of my life, or even the most embarrassing.
So I would consider the question “would you take X pre-memory wipe, or Y post-wipe?” highly dependant on X and Y. And yes, I find myself agreeing that X=‘condemn a stranger to torture’ would be exactly the kind of event that inflicts the majority of its suffering through memory and regret.
Just because your memory is going to get wiped afterwards does not mean that your on-the-spot preference is worth any less than post-memory-wipe-You’s. If you had a choice between being memory wiped, then stubbing your toe; versus taking a powerful kick to the balls now, then being memory wiped, I doubt you would sigh and spread your legs.
If you are gifted (or, in this particular case, cursed) with enough empathy that the very act of deciding to condemn a stranger to torture causes you pain, then I’m not sure you can concoct a hypothetical scenario wherein you can ignore said empathy while retaining your agency and/or identity.
DISINTEGRATING LIVE KITTENS is standard spell practice for schoolchildren in the Potterverse
Which spell would that be?
Incidentally, are there no Author’s Notes for chapter 84?
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Eliezer edited out his explicit resolution at some point before these updates began.