I think it might be fine. I don’t know. Maybe if you could number the posts like in the PDF that would help to demarcate them.
Here’s a timeline if you want to fully understand how I got confused:
I scrolled down to Will-to-Think and didn’t immediately recognise it (I didn’t realise they would be edited versions of his original blog posts)
I figured therefore it was your commentary
So I scrolled up to the top to read your commentary from the beginning
But I realised the stuff I was reading at the beginning was Nick Land’s writing not commentary
I got bored and moved on with my life still unsure about which parts were commentary and which parts weren’t
If the post were formatted differently maybe I would have been able to recover from my intitial confusion or avoid it altogether. But I’m not knowledgable about how to format things well.
If he were aiming for an authoritarian outcome, would it make any sense for him to say so? I don’t think so. Outlining such a plan would quite probably lead to him being ousted, and would have little upside.
The reason I think it would lead to his ouster is that most Americans’ reaction to the idea of an authoritarian AI regime would be strongly negative rather than positive.
So, I think his current actions align with his plan being something authoritarian.