That shouldn’t be too hard. He was somewhat of a dolt to begin with if I recall. You can get away with that when you are pretty, tall, brooding and have super powers!
I liked how you conveyed the introduction of Mike by the way. Both with Mike’s clear lack of luminosity and in how his awkwardness impacted Bella.
That shouldn’t be too hard. He was somewhat of a dolt to begin with if I recall. You can get away with that when you are pretty, tall, brooding and have super powers!
I liked how you conveyed the introduction of Mike by the way. Both with Mike’s clear lack of luminosity and in how his awkwardness impacted Bella.