Come to think of it the lessons are remarkably similar to those found in Alicorn’s Luminosity that I’ve just been reading. I would go as far as to recommend Luminosity to people interested in gaining “PUA” kinds of qualities.
Amusingly, I’m trying to portray Edward as a little awkwardly unluminous whenever I can do it without screwing up the plot.
That shouldn’t be too hard. He was somewhat of a dolt to begin with if I recall. You can get away with that when you are pretty, tall, brooding and have super powers!
I liked how you conveyed the introduction of Mike by the way. Both with Mike’s clear lack of luminosity and in how his awkwardness impacted Bella.
Amusingly, I’m trying to portray Edward as a little awkwardly unluminous whenever I can do it without screwing up the plot.
That shouldn’t be too hard. He was somewhat of a dolt to begin with if I recall. You can get away with that when you are pretty, tall, brooding and have super powers!
I liked how you conveyed the introduction of Mike by the way. Both with Mike’s clear lack of luminosity and in how his awkwardness impacted Bella.