She left her wand on the bar and she didn’t immediately lose? Moody must have expected her to have another wand, given that she left her wand on the bar theatrically.
You respect J.K. Rowling’s copyright. Harry Potter fanfiction must remain non-commercial, especially in the strict sense of traditional print publishing.
This is so good. For simplicities sake, I will refrain from making suggestions about some of the aspects of the combat though, unless you ask. You paint a picture though!
She left her wand on the bar and she didn’t immediately lose? Moody must have expected her to have another wand, given that she left her wand on the bar theatrically.
She doesn’t have to touch the wand. She is just that good.
Notice how this Moody can still be Crouch Jr.
“Are you here to take me back?” “Not yet. Not today.”
I’m not sure he would be paranoid enough. Anyway this seems to be a continuation of HPMoR.
Isn’t there an end date on that?
In theory, yes. In practice, copyrights keep getting extended.
This is so good. For simplicities sake, I will refrain from making suggestions about some of the aspects of the combat though, unless you ask. You paint a picture though!
Whose hair?
Fixed. Thanks.