This is great editing feedback. Thank you. I have made a change to my use of italics that makes the typography a little less confusing.
I’ve added a note to explain why the probabilities add up to less than 100%.
As for your last pedantic stylistic point: you are completely correct. I have fixed it. Thanks.
This is great editing feedback. Thank you. I have made a change to my use of italics that makes the typography a little less confusing.
I’ve added a note to explain why the probabilities add up to less than 100%.
As for your last pedantic stylistic point: you are completely correct. I have fixed it. Thanks.