FYI: Version 1 of Ch. 50 had Harry approaching Padma directly… and having to be considerably more threatening in order to have a smaller impact on her, which is what got him in trouble with Hermione in the original version.
Version 2 won out over Version 1 because it was weirder, and therefore more awesome; and also because it got him into less trouble with Hermione—I didn’t like having her be quite so clearly in the right in Version 1, i.e., so right that even Harry would notice. It had to end on a note of ambiguity from Harry’s perspective.
The thing a reader suggested that I’m embarrassed not to have thought of as an option was that Harry should have gotten a teacher Padma respected to do it. But then Harry would not have thought of this over an even longer time period than I didn’t. And it probably still wouldn’t have worked as well as the ghost, on a purely individual level for Padma, simply because Mysterious Visitations are supposed to be Life-Changing Events and having a teacher talk to you isn’t.
FYI: Version 1 of Ch. 50 had Harry approaching Padma directly… and having to be considerably more threatening in order to have a smaller impact on her, which is what got him in trouble with Hermione in the original version.
Version 2 won out over Version 1 because it was weirder, and therefore more awesome; and also because it got him into less trouble with Hermione—I didn’t like having her be quite so clearly in the right in Version 1, i.e., so right that even Harry would notice. It had to end on a note of ambiguity from Harry’s perspective.
The thing a reader suggested that I’m embarrassed not to have thought of as an option was that Harry should have gotten a teacher Padma respected to do it. But then Harry would not have thought of this over an even longer time period than I didn’t. And it probably still wouldn’t have worked as well as the ghost, on a purely individual level for Padma, simply because Mysterious Visitations are supposed to be Life-Changing Events and having a teacher talk to you isn’t.