Note that evolution is not in this picture: its role has been usurped by the engineers who wrote the PyTorch code. This is intelligent design, not evolution!
IMO you should put evolution in the picture, as another part of the analogy! :) Make a new row at the top, with “Genomes evolving over millions of generations on a planet, as organisms with better combinations of genes outcompete others” on the left and “Code libraries evolving over thousands of days in an industry, as software/ANN’s with better code outcompete (in the economy, in the academic prestige competition, in the minds of individual researchers) others” on the right. (Or some shortened version of that)
IMO you should put evolution in the picture, as another part of the analogy! :) Make a new row at the top, with “Genomes evolving over millions of generations on a planet, as organisms with better combinations of genes outcompete others” on the left and “Code libraries evolving over thousands of days in an industry, as software/ANN’s with better code outcompete (in the economy, in the academic prestige competition, in the minds of individual researchers) others” on the right. (Or some shortened version of that)