If you must post it at all, I suggest posting in Discussion. Based on the present draft, I expect it’ll have negative (Karma) value even there… (The main problem is basically that the essay is not sufficiently lucid. It’s a mysterious discussion of a mysterious topic.)
Ok, I deleted it. Soon I’ll post a version with the whole text, to avoid repost problems. thanks for the comments.
Before doing that, get someone for whom English is their first language to read it over. This is unreadably badly written.
If you must post it at all, I suggest posting in Discussion. Based on the present draft, I expect it’ll have negative (Karma) value even there… (The main problem is basically that the essay is not sufficiently lucid. It’s a mysterious discussion of a mysterious topic.)