This post could use some polish: it’s not clear what the message is (not that it’s impossible to discern it, but...), and how the paragraphs are related.
Also, “It would be peculiar to argue” is a poor argument.
Can you give any advice on improving it?
This post could use some polish: it’s not clear what the message is (not that it’s impossible to discern it, but...), and how the paragraphs are related.
Also, “It would be peculiar to argue” is a poor argument.
Can you give any advice on improving it?