Typos:
These paragraphs
You say “Like all economics professors [....] I can’t grant you an extension. A third student comes to you [....] the one whose mother died.
You say “Like all economics professors [....] I can’t grant you an extension.
A third student comes to you [....] the one whose mother died.
should end in quotation marks.
In this sentence
“The student who was here before me, that’s different.
“me” should be “you”.
This paragraph
You respond “Although my policies [....] sufficient justification for almost anyone breaking any law.
should end in a (double) quotation mark and most of the quotation marks in it are nested so should be single.
(Upvoted, by the way.)
You missed the “they enjoys” one. You’re fired as official Less Wrong proofreader. (just kidding, thanks for the corrections)
This comment is a little late, but the last paragraph mentioned actually shouldn’t end in a double quote, because it’s the same speaker as the next paragraph. (This tripped me up while I was reading.)
Indeed! (For that matter the single versus double quote stuff in that paragraph still isn’t right.)
Edit: Specifically, “well-known religious rituals” should be followed by a single quote not a double one.
Typos:
These paragraphs
should end in quotation marks.
In this sentence
“me” should be “you”.
This paragraph
should end in a (double) quotation mark and most of the quotation marks in it are nested so should be single.
(Upvoted, by the way.)
You missed the “they enjoys” one. You’re fired as official Less Wrong proofreader. (just kidding, thanks for the corrections)
This comment is a little late, but the last paragraph mentioned actually shouldn’t end in a double quote, because it’s the same speaker as the next paragraph. (This tripped me up while I was reading.)
Indeed! (For that matter the single versus double quote stuff in that paragraph still isn’t right.)
Edit: Specifically, “well-known religious rituals” should be followed by a single quote not a double one.