Definitely the antagonistic bits—I enjoyed the casual style! Really just the line ‘ Sit down. Sit down. Shut up. Listen. You don’t know nothing yet’ I found quite off-putting—even though in hindsight you were correct!
Very reasonable, noted and thanks for explaining! FWIW my intended vibe there was humorously overhyped—like that I, a stranger, was bursting into your life to tell you about trees—but also definitely see why it would be offputting.
Definitely the antagonistic bits—I enjoyed the casual style! Really just the line ‘ Sit down. Sit down. Shut up. Listen. You don’t know nothing yet’ I found quite off-putting—even though in hindsight you were correct!
Very reasonable, noted and thanks for explaining! FWIW my intended vibe there was humorously overhyped—like that I, a stranger, was bursting into your life to tell you about trees—but also definitely see why it would be offputting.
As an additional data point, I thought it was fine and my interpretation matched pretty well to the intentions you described.