First couple of sentences seem reasonable, something I was thinking but didn’t comment. However, the rest of this seems needlessly aggressive. I’d almost recommend pairing down to the limited critique and fleshing that out in more detail.
OK I’ve taken your advice. I toned it down and elaborated. Thanks
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First couple of sentences seem reasonable, something I was thinking but didn’t comment. However, the rest of this seems needlessly aggressive. I’d almost recommend pairing down to the limited critique and fleshing that out in more detail.
OK I’ve taken your advice. I toned it down and elaborated. Thanks
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