I added the prologue when an earlier version of the first chapter had a much weaker opening couple of opening sentences, but the first sentences here really don’t need that extra intro.
But tone down the preachiness seems to be the general advice. I think I went too far in trying to make sure that certain ideas were clearly covered.
Yeah, you are right.
I added the prologue when an earlier version of the first chapter had a much weaker opening couple of opening sentences, but the first sentences here really don’t need that extra intro.
But tone down the preachiness seems to be the general advice. I think I went too far in trying to make sure that certain ideas were clearly covered.