I’m not sure what you mean. Can you think of any particularly jarring examples, offhand?
Harry’s thoughts toward the end of chapter 45 and his speeches (e.g. “I have a dream”) in chapter 47. I couldn’t even read them.
Well how do you recommend we destroy dementors?
I don’t know, but if the secret to Patronus 2.0 really is nausea I’m sure there is a better way...
Throw them into the Sun?
You have to be careful with the whole ‘destroy the enormously destructive thing by throwing into the sun’ move. Unless you know what you’re doing the Sun might lose!
Some people even blow up suns in their spare time. Carter or McKay or Soran?
“Into the fiery orb with ye!”
That link was nearly as bad as TV Tropes. I only just escaped.
SCP Foundation is linked from tvtropes. A lot.
I’m not sure what you mean. Can you think of any particularly jarring examples, offhand?
Harry’s thoughts toward the end of chapter 45 and his speeches (e.g. “I have a dream”) in chapter 47. I couldn’t even read them.
Well how do you recommend we destroy dementors?
I don’t know, but if the secret to Patronus 2.0 really is nausea I’m sure there is a better way...
Throw them into the Sun?
You have to be careful with the whole ‘destroy the enormously destructive thing by throwing into the sun’ move. Unless you know what you’re doing the Sun might lose!
Some people even blow up suns in their spare time. Carter or McKay or Soran?
“Into the fiery orb with ye!”
That link was nearly as bad as TV Tropes. I only just escaped.
SCP Foundation is linked from tvtropes. A lot.