I endorse basically all of your constructive critique, as well as your more vaguely voiced concerns. I went back through and addressed everything in the above comment at least in part, though for some things (like your final concern about the motion in step 5) “addressing” it looked like “admitting to and lampshading the handwaving.”
I do think that you pointing out the teachable moment on the phrase “conditioned on” was super high value, and I’m glad for the opportunity to edit that in.
I endorse basically all of your constructive critique, as well as your more vaguely voiced concerns. I went back through and addressed everything in the above comment at least in part, though for some things (like your final concern about the motion in step 5) “addressing” it looked like “admitting to and lampshading the handwaving.”
I do think that you pointing out the teachable moment on the phrase “conditioned on” was super high value, and I’m glad for the opportunity to edit that in.