I read the first chapter and it doesn’t seem particularly good, let alone “excellent”. It has thoughts in quotation marks and clumsy narration and dull dialogue. Does it get markedly better a ways in?
If you haven’t liked it so far, I suggest you just stop.
For whatever reason, I enjoyed it.
I read the first chapter and it doesn’t seem particularly good, let alone “excellent”. It has thoughts in quotation marks and clumsy narration and dull dialogue. Does it get markedly better a ways in?
If you haven’t liked it so far, I suggest you just stop.
For whatever reason, I enjoyed it.