Also, that’s an excellent fanfiction overall. The premise is fairly standard, but I’m enjoying the execution. Please read it and spam the author with reviews threatening them if they abandon the fic.
I read the first chapter and it doesn’t seem particularly good, let alone “excellent”. It has thoughts in quotation marks and clumsy narration and dull dialogue. Does it get markedly better a ways in?
Example of how to insert a song into fanfictions without making it jarring: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6091629/13/Triwizard-Tournament-Take-Two
Also, that’s an excellent fanfiction overall. The premise is fairly standard, but I’m enjoying the execution. Please read it and spam the author with reviews threatening them if they abandon the fic.
I read the first chapter and it doesn’t seem particularly good, let alone “excellent”. It has thoughts in quotation marks and clumsy narration and dull dialogue. Does it get markedly better a ways in?
If you haven’t liked it so far, I suggest you just stop.
For whatever reason, I enjoyed it.