Typos:
What kind of author gives her hero two magical maps? → gave her hero
It’s redundant. → “It was redundant.” Though “two maps” <-> “it” still sounds weird, so maybe something like “That was redundant.”
If she was a princess her cute animal companion [...]. → princess, her
even though hone of them cared → none
cared how he had won → (unsure if incorrect?) “that he had won” or “cared for how he had won”
Lockhart’s brandished → Lockhart brandished
Congratulations Ms. Lovegood → “Congratulations, Ms. Lovegood” (unsure if incorrect)
also: “set food” → “set foot”
Fixed. Thanks.
Thanks. I fixed the errors and preserved the stylistic choices.
Typos:
What kind of author gives her hero two magical maps? → gave her hero
It’s redundant. → “It was redundant.” Though “two maps” <-> “it” still sounds weird, so maybe something like “That was redundant.”
If she was a princess her cute animal companion [...]. → princess, her
even though hone of them cared → none
cared how he had won → (unsure if incorrect?) “that he had won” or “cared for how he had won”
Lockhart’s brandished → Lockhart brandished
Congratulations Ms. Lovegood → “Congratulations, Ms. Lovegood” (unsure if incorrect)
also: “set food” → “set foot”
Fixed. Thanks.
Thanks. I fixed the errors and preserved the stylistic choices.