Sorry, I meant “The new paragraph should probably have its first reference to Potter by name rather than pronoun,” or “For each paragraph, the first mention of a person should not be a pronoun referring to a previous paragraph,” not “The first mention of Potter by name in the essay should be in a later paragraph than the first.”
Sorry, I meant “The new paragraph should probably have its first reference to Potter by name rather than pronoun,” or “For each paragraph, the first mention of a person should not be a pronoun referring to a previous paragraph,” not “The first mention of Potter by name in the essay should be in a later paragraph than the first.”