I actually didn’t make many other changes (originally I was planning to rewrite large chunks of it to reflect my own understanding. Instead, the primary thing ended up being “what happens when I simply convert a post with 18px font into a comment with 13px font). I trimmed out a few words that seemed excessive, but this was more an exercise in “what if LW posts looked more like comments?” or something.
That said, if you think it’d be useful I’d be up for making another more serious attempt to trim it down and/or make it more readable—this is something I could imagine turning out to be a valuable thing for me to spend time on on a regular basis.
I actually didn’t make many other changes (originally I was planning to rewrite large chunks of it to reflect my own understanding. Instead, the primary thing ended up being “what happens when I simply convert a post with 18px font into a comment with 13px font). I trimmed out a few words that seemed excessive, but this was more an exercise in “what if LW posts looked more like comments?” or something.
That said, if you think it’d be useful I’d be up for making another more serious attempt to trim it down and/or make it more readable—this is something I could imagine turning out to be a valuable thing for me to spend time on on a regular basis.