I will write no sequel myself; I have said what I set out to say, and it is done.
I assume that, as Rowling did, you’ll drop us a few paragraphs of writing in five/ten years, which naturally you couldn’t keep to yourself. I would bet money, but will not remember (or care) for that long.
If there’s a nit to pick, it’s that the mockery of canon-Potter was way too blatant to be amusing. Otherwise, almost perfect work.
I didn’t see this chapter so much as mockey of canon-Potter, merely bouncing off of it, noting it’s different. Canon HP is not this HP, mainly reasons for which canon HP cannot be blamed.
But it only matches canon halfway. They’re describing Harry raised by James and Lily, not by the Dursleys. They suggest that Harry and Hermione won’t be friends, although later suggest that they’ll at least be allies. And … another difference, I’d have to look.
Why does it being blatant mean it is no longer humorous? Sure, a subtle joke can be more humorous for its subtlety, but not being subtle doesn’t necessarily preclude a joke’s enjoyment.
There are many forms, and EY is probably trying catering to a range of people’s sense of humour.
I assume that, as Rowling did, you’ll drop us a few paragraphs of writing in five/ten years, which naturally you couldn’t keep to yourself. I would bet money, but will not remember (or care) for that long.
If there’s a nit to pick, it’s that the mockery of canon-Potter was way too blatant to be amusing. Otherwise, almost perfect work.
I didn’t see this chapter so much as mockey of canon-Potter, merely bouncing off of it, noting it’s different. Canon HP is not this HP, mainly reasons for which canon HP cannot be blamed.
There was one part where they were talking about what would happen if Harry were not raised by scientists, and EY basically describes canon.
… yes, and? They weren’t making fun of canon, just joking about it. Canon!Harry could have made much the same jokes about Rationalist!Harry.
But it only matches canon halfway. They’re describing Harry raised by James and Lily, not by the Dursleys. They suggest that Harry and Hermione won’t be friends, although later suggest that they’ll at least be allies. And … another difference, I’d have to look.
Why does it being blatant mean it is no longer humorous? Sure, a subtle joke can be more humorous for its subtlety, but not being subtle doesn’t necessarily preclude a joke’s enjoyment.
There are many forms, and EY is probably trying catering to a range of people’s sense of humour.
You did actually read the part where Hermione says: “What if Harry Potter behaved exactly like canon, Quidditch, Ron Weasley, etc! Ha ha ha!”