Sorry to give only a surface-level point of feedback, but I think this post would be much, much better if you shortened it significantly. As far as I can tell, pretty much every paragraph is 3x longer than it could be, which makes it a slog to read through.
This was intended to be more of a technical report than a blog post, meaning I wanted to keep the discussion reasonably rigorous/thorough. Which always comes with the downside of it being a slog to read, so apologies for that!
I’ll write a shortened version if I find the time!
Sorry to give only a surface-level point of feedback, but I think this post would be much, much better if you shortened it significantly. As far as I can tell, pretty much every paragraph is 3x longer than it could be, which makes it a slog to read through.
Thanks for the feedback Garrett.
This was intended to be more of a technical report than a blog post, meaning I wanted to keep the discussion reasonably rigorous/thorough. Which always comes with the downside of it being a slog to read, so apologies for that!
I’ll write a shortened version if I find the time!