The use of “females” in the first line might as well be changed too. I’d just change it to “female people”, if I were you.
That’s even worse IMO. WTH is wrong with women? (Except that it can be taken to exclude children, but I don’t think there are many 10-year-olds reading LW anyway.)
fixed!
The use of “females” in the first line might as well be changed too. I’d just change it to “female people”, if I were you.
That’s even worse IMO. WTH is wrong with women? (Except that it can be taken to exclude children, but I don’t think there are many 10-year-olds reading LW anyway.)
fixed!