FWIW, “my” version was intended to be neutral (it says what InIn is trying to do and the criticisms that have been made on LW, and adds that it isn’t known how correct either “side” is about InIn’s effectiveness) and Gleb has said on the article’s talk page that he’s OK with it.
It was made in response to Richard Kennaway’s post about the edit war, in the hope of stopping it by having an InIn article that demonstrably isn’t just promotional puffery. [EDITED to add: that is not an accusation that Gleb’s version was just promotional puffery; but clearly it looked that way to VoiceOfRa, and probably to others too.]
So far as I can tell, the wiki weirdness is a combination of suboptimal cache-control headers and the odd way deletion is implemented, and is not a consequence of hacking or other abuse.
I do realize you were trying to be neutral, but it didn’t come out that way. The main problem was that the bit discussing criticism was full of fnords; there’s no sentence you can put next to “lowbrow oversimplified caricature creepy unnatural offputting” that can result in an overall impression of neutrality.
You may be right. On the other hand, the “anti” side of the debate was really strongly negative and there’s something to be said for conveying that. Regardless, your re-re-written version of the article looks fine and I hope it will suffice to stop the likes of VoR deleting it again.
FWIW, “my” version was intended to be neutral (it says what InIn is trying to do and the criticisms that have been made on LW, and adds that it isn’t known how correct either “side” is about InIn’s effectiveness) and Gleb has said on the article’s talk page that he’s OK with it.
It was made in response to Richard Kennaway’s post about the edit war, in the hope of stopping it by having an InIn article that demonstrably isn’t just promotional puffery. [EDITED to add: that is not an accusation that Gleb’s version was just promotional puffery; but clearly it looked that way to VoiceOfRa, and probably to others too.]
So far as I can tell, the wiki weirdness is a combination of suboptimal cache-control headers and the odd way deletion is implemented, and is not a consequence of hacking or other abuse.
I do realize you were trying to be neutral, but it didn’t come out that way. The main problem was that the bit discussing criticism was full of fnords; there’s no sentence you can put next to “lowbrow oversimplified caricature creepy unnatural offputting” that can result in an overall impression of neutrality.
You may be right. On the other hand, the “anti” side of the debate was really strongly negative and there’s something to be said for conveying that. Regardless, your re-re-written version of the article looks fine and I hope it will suffice to stop the likes of VoR deleting it again.