I do realize you were trying to be neutral, but it didn’t come out that way. The main problem was that the bit discussing criticism was full of fnords; there’s no sentence you can put next to “lowbrow oversimplified caricature creepy unnatural offputting” that can result in an overall impression of neutrality.
You may be right. On the other hand, the “anti” side of the debate was really strongly negative and there’s something to be said for conveying that. Regardless, your re-re-written version of the article looks fine and I hope it will suffice to stop the likes of VoR deleting it again.
I do realize you were trying to be neutral, but it didn’t come out that way. The main problem was that the bit discussing criticism was full of fnords; there’s no sentence you can put next to “lowbrow oversimplified caricature creepy unnatural offputting” that can result in an overall impression of neutrality.
You may be right. On the other hand, the “anti” side of the debate was really strongly negative and there’s something to be said for conveying that. Regardless, your re-re-written version of the article looks fine and I hope it will suffice to stop the likes of VoR deleting it again.