Better, but how about this:
“Philosophy’s pathetic pace could kill us.”
If his target audience is academia, then drastic claims (whether substantiated or not) are going to be an active turnoff, and should only be employed when absolutely necessary.
Better, but how about this:
“Philosophy’s pathetic pace could kill us.”
If his target audience is academia, then drastic claims (whether substantiated or not) are going to be an active turnoff, and should only be employed when absolutely necessary.