Writing feedback: You don’t need the word “however” in the second sentence; it’s ungrammatical, and a contrast is already implied by the phrase “even though”.
(that said, this is an interesting topic and I appreciate that you’re doing this review :-) )
Writing feedback: You don’t need the word “however” in the second sentence; it’s ungrammatical, and a contrast is already implied by the phrase “even though”.
(that said, this is an interesting topic and I appreciate that you’re doing this review :-) )