Neh. Eliezer, I’m kind of disappointed by how you write the tragic ending (“saving” humans) as if it’s the happy one, and the happy ending (civilization melting pot) as if it’s the tragic one. I’m not sure what to make of that.
Do you really, actually believe that, in this fictional scenario, the human race is better off sacrificing a part of itself in order to avoid blending with the super-happies?
It just blows my mind that you can write an intriguing story like this, and yet draw that kind of conclusion.
Well. I finally got around to reading The Unwilling Warlord, and I must say that, despite the world of Ethshar being mildly interesting, the book is disappointment. It builds up nice and well in the first 2⁄3 of the book, but in the last 1⁄3, when you expect it to unfold and flourish in some interesting, surprising, revealing manner, Watt-Evans instead decides to pursue the lamest, boringest plot possible, all the while insulting the reader’s intelligence.
For the last 1⁄3 of the book, Watt-Evans attempts to make the eventual reasons for Vond’s undoing a “mystery”. He suggests that Sterren knows the answer, but the reader is not told what it is. When the end finally arrives, it is a disapointing anti-climax as Watt-Evans chooses the most non-eventful possible outcome that has been blatantly obvious all the while.
He employs an exceedingly lame plot device where Vond is so stupid he just doesn’t see it coming. The author neither takes the opportunity to explain what the Calling is, nor does he have Sterren take Vond down in a more interesting manner, such as having Sterren go to the Towers of Lumeth and turning them off, or something.
Yes, the writing has some positive traits such as Eliezer described, but overall it’s much lamer and more amateurish than I expected. Given the recommendation, I would have expected this to be much better fiction than it turns out it is.