This one is my favorite so far! It feels like an old school horror story. I loved the closeness of the narrative camera and the narrator’s voice. Him siding with the self-replicating building was a cool twist too, I thought he would end up fleeing like Agnes was suggesting.
Great story. I haven’t thought you could cross steampunk and singularity, but it kind of works.
This one is my favorite so far! It feels like an old school horror story. I loved the closeness of the narrative camera and the narrator’s voice. Him siding with the self-replicating building was a cool twist too, I thought he would end up fleeing like Agnes was suggesting.