Earlier I noted that EY has a good bit of foreshadowing. Really spells things out.
A lot of that comes out in the dialogue. It occurred to me that dialogue is the closest thing we get to an unvarnished measurement in a story. The description of scenes and events are the voice of the author, but a character says what he says.
Earlier I noted that EY has a good bit of foreshadowing. Really spells things out.
A lot of that comes out in the dialogue. It occurred to me that dialogue is the closest thing we get to an unvarnished measurement in a story. The description of scenes and events are the voice of the author, but a character says what he says.
Except for cute things like “I’m not serious.”