Oh dear, I cannot stop gazing. It’s actually quite a fun read so far, although it seems more like a sloppy first draft than a polished novel. I guess that’s to be expected given the lack of editors in fanfic—I’ve clearly been spoiled by HPMOR and Luminosity.
I confess I rather enjoyed the part where Snape’s head exploded. There’s a certain window of “So bad it’s good” in there, before you get to the “So bad it’s horrible”. As I said in another comment, it’s not bad at the start.
Oh dear, I cannot stop gazing. It’s actually quite a fun read so far, although it seems more like a sloppy first draft than a polished novel. I guess that’s to be expected given the lack of editors in fanfic—I’ve clearly been spoiled by HPMOR and Luminosity.
I confess I rather enjoyed the part where Snape’s head exploded. There’s a certain window of “So bad it’s good” in there, before you get to the “So bad it’s horrible”. As I said in another comment, it’s not bad at the start.