I think it’s the type of inaccurate verbiage typical of writers trying to write above their ability.
Not at all. It is more accurate and clear than the vast majority of quotes in the quotes threads. It does a good job of translating the implied meaning (such as of the word ‘hate’ in the context) into more tangible descriptions.
Do you perhaps have a particular problem with semicolons? Or consider the status of urban dictionary authors insufficient to permit them the use of words like ‘rebuke’ and ‘participant’?
It is this urban dictionary definition that earned my upvote in this case (even though DHTP;HTG probably would have scraped through on its own).
Well, I deleted my post immediately because I decided I didn’t want to defend it, but since you saw it I will.
“Discern” is superfluous. What distinction is intended between “rebuke” and “fault”? Using “rebuke” for a behaviour, as opposed to a person, sounds wrong to my ears—the opposite of what is intended. What distinction is intended between “system” and “organization”? “Provoked your displeasure” is mealy-mouthed, especially when “hate” is the verb in the original. This type of writing says, I’ve got a thesaurus and I’m not afraid to use it.
Do you perhaps have a particular problem with semicolons? Or consider the status of urban dictionary authors insufficient to permit them the use of words like ‘rebuke’ and ‘participant’?
Haha, no, but that’s some nice assuming you’ve got there.
Not at all. It is more accurate and clear than the vast majority of quotes in the quotes threads. It does a good job of translating the implied meaning (such as of the word ‘hate’ in the context) into more tangible descriptions.
Do you perhaps have a particular problem with semicolons? Or consider the status of urban dictionary authors insufficient to permit them the use of words like ‘rebuke’ and ‘participant’?
It is this urban dictionary definition that earned my upvote in this case (even though DHTP;HTG probably would have scraped through on its own).
Well, I deleted my post immediately because I decided I didn’t want to defend it, but since you saw it I will.
“Discern” is superfluous. What distinction is intended between “rebuke” and “fault”? Using “rebuke” for a behaviour, as opposed to a person, sounds wrong to my ears—the opposite of what is intended. What distinction is intended between “system” and “organization”? “Provoked your displeasure” is mealy-mouthed, especially when “hate” is the verb in the original. This type of writing says, I’ve got a thesaurus and I’m not afraid to use it.
Haha, no, but that’s some nice assuming you’ve got there.