Actually, I find your version slightly funny, but I don’t like the original version.
I normally like anti-jokes, but for them to work, they should be both short and subvert a joke structure that was funny to begin with. I never liked the “misguided wish”. Overall, I strongly dislike long buildups. A joke should be efficient.
Actually, I find your version slightly funny, but I don’t like the original version.
I normally like anti-jokes, but for them to work, they should be both short and subvert a joke structure that was funny to begin with. I never liked the “misguided wish”. Overall, I strongly dislike long buildups. A joke should be efficient.