I have to agree with Eliezer here—stunningly good. I suspect that the problem you are facing is quite simple—at the end, Celestia dies. At the end, she did reject immortality, so readers interpreted that she was making a decision to rid herself of the ‘curse’ of immortality.
I have to agree with Eliezer here—stunningly good. I suspect that the problem you are facing is quite simple—at the end, Celestia dies. At the end, she did reject immortality, so readers interpreted that she was making a decision to rid herself of the ‘curse’ of immortality.