Well to be fair, if you hadn’t posted the story then I wouldn’t have been able to give input. One could say that it’s better to make something, see how it could be improved, and then try again than it would be to stress over “getting it right the first time” and risk it never getting finished at all.
There are some good ideas here—I wish now I’d written this post before posting the story. It’s a little late to go back and change it now.
Hell, no! You can totally fix your stories afterward. I do it all the time. Why wouldn’t I?
Well to be fair, if you hadn’t posted the story then I wouldn’t have been able to give input. One could say that it’s better to make something, see how it could be improved, and then try again than it would be to stress over “getting it right the first time” and risk it never getting finished at all.