This is stunningly good. There are only a few flaws and they would be very easy to fix, like the explicit mention of “evolutionary psychology”—which can be fixed by just deleting the texts “from evolutionary psychology” and “the dominance of individual over group selection” and leaving the rest of the paragraph exactly unchanged...
...actually, I think that’s the only flaw I found, which is amazing.
This is stunningly good. There are only a few flaws and they would be very easy to fix, like the explicit mention of “evolutionary psychology”—which can be fixed by just deleting the texts “from evolutionary psychology” and “the dominance of individual over group selection” and leaving the rest of the paragraph exactly unchanged...
...actually, I think that’s the only flaw I found, which is amazing.
I appreciated this comment a lot. I didn’t reply at the time, because I thought doing so might resurrect our group-selection argument. But thanks.