it’s obvious by his tone and wording that he has other motives, and that these are obvious enough to enough people that I expect this to cause many people’s guts to notice these motives and politically infect
How would you change this post to convey the same objections and points, but be less “infectious”?
I am prepared to take criticism into account and reword the article before it goes to the EA forum.
How would you change this post to convey the same objections and points, but be less “infectious”?
I am prepared to take criticism into account and reword the article before it goes to the EA forum.