This post takes a bunch of concepts I’m familiar with, but… sort of drops me in-media-res into the middle of a thought process that seems to take for granted how they all fit together. I think I get it, esp. by the time I get to the middle of the post, but I personally could have used more handholding in the beginning of “here’s what counting up and down are, here’s what coherence is, here’s (briefly) how they fit together (I realize kinda the whole post is explaining how they fit together, so maybe that’s unfair, but, it felt a bit abrupt to me)
Also “who is the target audience of this post? What research agendas or thought-processes does this fit into?” would have been good.
Thanks. Your comments make sense to me I think. But, these essays are more like research notes than they are trying to be good exposition, so I’m not necessarily trying to consistenly make them accessible. I’ll add a note to that effect in future.
This post takes a bunch of concepts I’m familiar with, but… sort of drops me in-media-res into the middle of a thought process that seems to take for granted how they all fit together. I think I get it, esp. by the time I get to the middle of the post, but I personally could have used more handholding in the beginning of “here’s what counting up and down are, here’s what coherence is, here’s (briefly) how they fit together (I realize kinda the whole post is explaining how they fit together, so maybe that’s unfair, but, it felt a bit abrupt to me)
Also “who is the target audience of this post? What research agendas or thought-processes does this fit into?” would have been good.
Thanks. Your comments make sense to me I think. But, these essays are more like research notes than they are trying to be good exposition, so I’m not necessarily trying to consistenly make them accessible. I’ll add a note to that effect in future.
Sure, sounds reasonable