What if she died because it was her Destiny? She went to do battle with the troll, because it was her duty to die and be reborn as something greater than she was? It wasn’t Harry’s fault because she chose to be struck down, and will become even more powerful than we could possibly imagine?
If it’s all part of her plan, will you retract the critique?
Possibly. It would depend on when and how that is presented in the story really. There is a problem with critiquing a work in progress which I am aware of, but I think its sort of inevitable with the sort of release schedule this story has.
What if Hermione dying was NOT to motivate Harry?
What if she died because it was her Destiny? She went to do battle with the troll, because it was her duty to die and be reborn as something greater than she was? It wasn’t Harry’s fault because she chose to be struck down, and will become even more powerful than we could possibly imagine?
If it’s all part of her plan, will you retract the critique?
I certainly will. Do you think there’s any appreciable chance that Eliezer will do that, and it will be awesome? I’m not seeing it.
Possibly. It would depend on when and how that is presented in the story really. There is a problem with critiquing a work in progress which I am aware of, but I think its sort of inevitable with the sort of release schedule this story has.
Given how EY seems to have developed his overall plot out of what appeared in the books, this already isn’t far from the truth.