Hmm, somehow “enemies” felt like it raised my curiosity more than “admirers”, though I also didn’t notice the “enemies” until someone else saw an earlier draft and pointed that out. I guess for these ones, it’s a little subjective whether they count as open loops or not—whether you feel like the sentences are self-explanatory on their own or whether you feel like you want to know more.
Isn’t this another loop that you didn’t mention? :P
Who are his admirers? Just like who are his enemies.
I’d add “what’s the deal with being dragon spawned, is that really what it sounds like, and if so why would you hunt dragons?”
Hmm, somehow “enemies” felt like it raised my curiosity more than “admirers”, though I also didn’t notice the “enemies” until someone else saw an earlier draft and pointed that out. I guess for these ones, it’s a little subjective whether they count as open loops or not—whether you feel like the sentences are self-explanatory on their own or whether you feel like you want to know more.