Hmm, somehow “enemies” felt like it raised my curiosity more than “admirers”, though I also didn’t notice the “enemies” until someone else saw an earlier draft and pointed that out. I guess for these ones, it’s a little subjective whether they count as open loops or not—whether you feel like the sentences are self-explanatory on their own or whether you feel like you want to know more.
Hmm, somehow “enemies” felt like it raised my curiosity more than “admirers”, though I also didn’t notice the “enemies” until someone else saw an earlier draft and pointed that out. I guess for these ones, it’s a little subjective whether they count as open loops or not—whether you feel like the sentences are self-explanatory on their own or whether you feel like you want to know more.