You use the “Golem Genie” in an odd way (it figures in only a tiny portion of the paper). You introduce the thought experiment (to elicit a sense of urgency and concrete importance, I assume), and point out the analogy to superintelligence. With the exception of a few words on hedonistic utilitarianism, all the specific examples of moral theories resulting in unwanted consequences when implemented are talked about with reference to superintelligence, never mentioning the Genie again. If you want to keep the Genie part, I would keep it until you’ve gone through all the moral theories you discuss, and only at the end point out the analogy to superintelligence.
You use the “Golem Genie” in an odd way (it figures in only a tiny portion of the paper). You introduce the thought experiment (to elicit a sense of urgency and concrete importance, I assume), and point out the analogy to superintelligence. With the exception of a few words on hedonistic utilitarianism, all the specific examples of moral theories resulting in unwanted consequences when implemented are talked about with reference to superintelligence, never mentioning the Genie again. If you want to keep the Genie part, I would keep it until you’ve gone through all the moral theories you discuss, and only at the end point out the analogy to superintelligence.