The state of flux is MOOCs being new, so much cheaper, and the cost disparity getting constantly larger.
If you’re really talking about MOOCs and price is a minor adjunct to that, you should mention MOOCs first.
Reasonable. I like presenting it as “we have X trend which was becoming increasingly unsustainable and is now being challenged by Y trend” but if people are finding it confusing I should edit. Is it confusing to other people?
The state of flux is MOOCs being new, so much cheaper, and the cost disparity getting constantly larger.
If you’re really talking about MOOCs and price is a minor adjunct to that, you should mention MOOCs first.
Reasonable. I like presenting it as “we have X trend which was becoming increasingly unsustainable and is now being challenged by Y trend” but if people are finding it confusing I should edit. Is it confusing to other people?