with a population only 1.5 million people → of only
Instead of sitting on the couches he stood → couches, he stood
Administrator Qian was like being a cloistered monk
a bunch of nerds on the darkweb somehow knows more → know more
markets predict we’ll performing → we’ll be performing / we will perform
said Dufu. He snapped his fingers. Two bear-sized goons seized Wang by his upper arms. → [Starting from this point, and continuing for the rest of the section, Dufu and Wang are mixed up.]
typo: “we’ll be performing few of crimes in Jining” ⇒ “a few crimes”/”a few of the crimes”/”few of the crimes”
Depending on if the prior expectation was “no crimes”/”crimes by others”/”a lot of crimes by this group”—I wasn’t actually too sure based on the context.
Typos:
sub-provincial officials ruling officials → sub-provincial ruling officials
with a population only 1.5 million people → of only
Instead of sitting on the couches he stood → couches, he stood
Administrator Qian was like being a cloistered monk
a bunch of nerds on the darkweb somehow knows more → know more
markets predict we’ll performing → we’ll be performing / we will perform
said Dufu. He snapped his fingers. Two bear-sized goons seized Wang by his upper arms. → [Starting from this point, and continuing for the rest of the section, Dufu and Wang are mixed up.]
typo: “we’ll be performing few of crimes in Jining” ⇒ “a few crimes”/”a few of the crimes”/”few of the crimes”
Depending on if the prior expectation was “no crimes”/”crimes by others”/”a lot of crimes by this group”—I wasn’t actually too sure based on the context.
Thanks for the story!
Fixed. Thanks.
So many typos. All fixed. Thanks.
You’re welcome, and thanks for writing these stories!
One typo fix introduced another typo, though:
Fixed. Thanks.
One more!
Fixed. Thanks.
Should be “know” and “than”
Fixed. Thanks.
New typo:
she says the money we earn higher net profit by not committing crimes
Fixed. Thanks.
Fixed. Thanks.