I find it very helpful to get feedback on LW posts before I publish them, but it adds a lot of delay to the process. So, experiment: here’s a link to a google doc with a post I plan to put up tomorrow. If anyone wants to give editorial feedback, that would be much appreciated—comments on the doc are open.
I’m mainly looking for comments on which things are confusing, parts which feel incomplete or slow or repetitive, and other writing-related things; substantive comments on the content should go on the actual post once it’s up.
EDIT: it’s up. Thank you to Stephen for comments; the post is better as a result.
I find it very helpful to get feedback on LW posts before I publish them, but it adds a lot of delay to the process. So, experiment: here’s a link to a google doc with a post I plan to put up tomorrow. If anyone wants to give editorial feedback, that would be much appreciated—comments on the doc are open.
I’m mainly looking for comments on which things are confusing, parts which feel incomplete or slow or repetitive, and other writing-related things; substantive comments on the content should go on the actual post once it’s up.
EDIT: it’s up. Thank you to Stephen for comments; the post is better as a result.