Those comments should’ve been better formulated and written in a better tone. Nothing is wrong with most individual sentences, but overall it doesn’t paint a pretty picture.
If you only do it for a day or so, you get just a few corruption points, and may continue serving the Imperium at the price of but a tiny portion of your soul. Chaos has great gifts in store for those who refuse to be consumed by it!
Those comments should’ve been better formulated and written in a better tone. Nothing is wrong with most individual sentences, but overall it doesn’t paint a pretty picture.
(“The underclasses are starting to get desperate. Your turn.”—“Desperate.”—“Desperate.”—“Desperate.”)
I can agree with that. But this is then a dispute about levels of writing skill not content no?
These are connected. What and how we write influences what and how we think.
Well sure but dosen’t this undermine the argument that:
If you only do it for a day or so, you get just a few corruption points, and may continue serving the Imperium at the price of but a tiny portion of your soul. Chaos has great gifts in store for those who refuse to be consumed by it!
Well done, I had to up vote the reference. :D